Dave (dakegra) wrote,


Dear Novel-in-progress

You appear to be going quite well. A healthy mixture of characters are pootling around doing Stuff and getting themslves in position. Scenes are being set, and we know who's who and who's where and (more or less) why they're there.

Just a little question. You remember back on Day One? We introduced Zela Cauldwell, aka Zee. She was supposed to be this rough, tough bounty hunter escorting her captive from Mars to Earth. You know, a Main Character?

What happened to her? Since then we've had Commander Ortega, Lt Woods and Giles on the 'good' side. Dravin Renau, Sorensen, Simone and Thompson on the other side. Oh, and the light relief duo of Anders and Shaw. Not forgetting the tall Arthur and his bear-like companion (yet to be named)

Zee has been in the story for less than 10% of the time. I think it's time we got back to her, eh?

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